october25(00.00.00):
I dont know more about beyluxe. These days I am learning about it. I was learnt yesterday by sir, how can use mic dot quickly. I was very poor in English, these days I have been learning about English. Thanks a lot our respected sir who is teaching English well. I appreciate Mr.mothercare; he opened a valuable room for ours. I will continue here
I am October25, Our respected sir undomz ordered yesterday bring 10 sentences about beyluxe. What I say about beyluxe!!! My friend had told me about it before one year, but I didnt mind it, so 
Very nice October25! yu are the one responding faster and very much committed to your learning!
ReplyDelete* I was learnt by UP is wrong; I was taught by UP<< correct or just i Learnt from UP; he taught us is much better..
*ordered yesterday (to) bring (asked is fine instead of ordered)
mother care...this is not complete..yu missed some of his lines..check your archive to get the full!
[october25(00.00.00): I am October25, Our respected sir undomz ordered yesterday bring 10 sentences about beyluxe. What I say about beyluxe!!! My friend had told me about it before one year, but I didn’t mind it, so
ReplyDeleteI don’t know more about beyluxe. These days I am learning about it. I was learnt yesterday by sir, how can use mic dot quickly. I was very poor in English, these days I have been learning about English. Thanks a lot our respected sir who is teaching English well. I appreciate Mr.mothercare; he opened a valuable room for ours. I will continue here] This is the full
* how can use mic dot quickly<< this is wrong..missing the subject! here yu can use " how to use (or apply > more proper)and quicker or faster instead of quick ( this means faster or quicker than what i can do at present- so comparetive digree (eg:more, better, faster, sooner, earlier) is better
ReplyDeleteso the sentence can be;
I learnt yesterday from sir how to apply mic dot faster!
or i was taught by sir how to apply mic dot faster (or in a much faster way)rest is great!